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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:36 pm 
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It's not that most people are more than aware of that that is written under each corporation on the new homepage, it's that it's too little. If there allready are more i would love to be able to read it there, and if there's not, why not write some more? I think this could be one piece to tie people up as well.


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:40 pm 
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Patience, Mr. Andy Hoare is working on it :)


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 7:52 pm 
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Michal@Prodos wrote:
Patience, Mr. Andy Hoare is working on it :)

ROCK ON! 8-)


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 8:16 pm 
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Michal@Prodos wrote:
Patience, Mr. Andy Hoare is working on it :)



I wish you could understand how much my old-school gamer's heart just jumped for joy reading that sentence.


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 8:20 pm 
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I really like his work from w40k rpg so I am sure it will be great. Now they should proof read all sections because after just first read I found first error - in Mishima background it is written "Neroian Heresy" instead of Neronian Heresy.


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2013 9:04 pm 
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Yeah proofreading all of the sections is needed, to maintain a professional look. There are grammar mistakes all over the place (i.e. rised instead of rose ect..) I realize that some of the designers aren't english first speakers and their english is better then most of our polish but it would help keep the site looking professional.


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 06, 2013 10:22 am 
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If you knew where these have been copied from, you'll laugh! :lol:
I'm sure they will get checked.


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PostPosted: Wed Mar 06, 2013 6:56 pm 
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Tell us where ! :)


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:13 pm 
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Michal@Prodos wrote:
Patience, Mr. Andy Hoare is working on it :)


Who has written the text currently up on the site? I'm sorry, but unless you're already familiar with Mutant Chronicles, it's really uninformative. It gives very little useful information about the game world or the different factions. It is also very sloppily edited. In the Brotherhood text, there's some sentences seemingly slapped on to the end that are grammatically incoherent.

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When BROTHERHOOD rised from ashes, then another power rised - forces of DARK LEGION where spread all over the universe and attacked humanity. Activity of DARK LEAGION started when IMPERIAL ship (again) land on a new planet - last planet of our solar system, planet NERO. All MEGACORPORATIONS was leading by BROTHERHOOD and they met on the battlefield on VENUS in the last fight against DARK LEGION forces.


Seriously, that looks really unprofessional.


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PostPosted: Fri Mar 08, 2013 2:40 pm 
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I'm not certain, but I think the text has been copied and pasted from an old source.


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